'Emerson' Story - An Update
Hey guys. Just to let anyone interested know that I've worked a bit on my 'Emerson' piece of a few weeks back - just use the Blogger search function to bring it up.
Some minor changes throughout - the voice of 'Emerson' has been made more distinctive to character and more consistent - 'friends' should've been 'mates', 'thanks' 'ta', 'think' 'reckon' and so on. And I've tried to catch him more physically - bring him more into focus from that angle.
But the main thing is that the story's been extended. I'd run out of creative steam by the time I originally got to the end and it kinda fizzed out cos of that. So there's more steamy stuff - all just to reveal character of course!
Hope you enjoy!
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